I like this! And I like your writing! Your style is so descriptive with so few words, and so far, you've caught my attention. This was a dramatic intro, and ironically, as the man called Naruto emotionless, I felt we could practically feel Naruto's emotions pouring off. This was a really impressive chapter, I thought it was amazing. Well done, I definitely look forward to seeing more. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks you very much.